Date: 2008-04-01 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tawncherie.livejournal.com
I think it's a good start, and I like the style (I call it Species Is, and it's been mentioned that it's a pretty common style) because it's poetic. But other styles can be easier and more personal and pretty too, that's my real thought on this, that it seems a little distanced, not quite personal. And like there's more animal as a species and less animal as you? And since this is a 'What I Am' sort of essay, self love is important. =D


(Reading other people's work influences my writing too actually. XD)
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