Thanks for the feedback! :) It's hard for me to describe the "essence" of puma, but I'll keep that in mind and keep trying to harness it (it's sill definitely WIP, so I'll continue adding to it; I just wanted to get something up, since it's been a while and I need to get back into the swing of things). And I'm not suprised about the style- I've probably read so many other peoples' essays that they probably subconsciously influenced me, at least in terms of how they're written. I'll try to give it more "me-ness". :P

And the duiker part's not finished yet. ;P Even now I'm thinking of stuff to add and elaborate on...